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kingryan



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PostSubject: Ryan's Application   Wed May 24, 2017 9:15 pm

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Name:Unteroffizier Niels Weber (OR-5)
Alias(es):N/A
Age:40
Ethnicity:Caucasian
Character Advantages/Talents:
Resilient - He has taken his fair share of pain.
Well Trained - Like any other soldier, he's been through his fair share of training.
Character Disadvantages/Weaknesses:
Stubborn - He doesn't often take no for an answer.
Sticks out - He's not breaching height limits tall, but he's pretty up there.
Machine Gunner Syndrome - He is slowed down by the sheer amount of gear he carries.
Military Branch / Country of Origin:
German Bundeswehr - Kommando Spezialkräfte
Current Equipment:
H&K USP
Rheinmetall MG3
Standard German Bundeswehr Field Equipment
Point-Form Biography:

  • Niels Weber is born, in the town of Munich, Germany, to a working, middle class family.
  • Niels turns 10, on December 30th, 1990
  • 8 years later, at age 18, Niels enlists into the German Bundeswehr, inspired by patriotism, especially due to the imminent reunification of Germany.
  • Niels is deployed into the Yugoslav Wars, to act as a peacekeeping force. He serves less than a year before they end. He is sent back home.
  • 2003, Niels is a Stabsgefreiter in the 7th Panzergrenadiers. He hears of the KSK open recruitment. He enlists.
  • 2003, Niels passes the four month long initial recruitment phase. He gets greenlit to go into the three year training phase.
  • 2003-2006, Niels gets trained to be a KSK member. He is taken to Norway, Belize,
    Texas, etc.
  • 2007. Niels formally graduates the training. He is now an official member of the KSK.
  • Niels is deployed to Afghanistan, starting mid 2010. He is part of a German contribution there.
  • 2014, Niels and his detachment are withdrawn from Afghanistan.
  • 2020, the war breaks out. Niels' KSK detachment is sent off to serve.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryan's Application   Wed May 24, 2017 11:44 pm

Hmm..



Ja -- Ja, das ist gut.


could make him a tad younger. most KSK guys are in their early to mid 30's

also jot down what his current rank is that would be good too
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PostSubject: Re: Ryan's Application   Thu May 25, 2017 7:11 am

Machine gunners don't carry assault rifles. That's why they're machine gunners. Pick one.

2020-1990=30 btw. Not 40.

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PostSubject: Re: Ryan's Application   Thu May 25, 2017 5:07 pm

Removed G36.
I don't think I put that he was born in 1990. He turns 10 in 1990, so he was born in 1980.
Added rank
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PostSubject: Re: Ryan's Application   Thu May 25, 2017 5:17 pm

This guy, at face value, looks like that generic "JA IM A TALL GERMAN ARYAN WHO ISN'T REALLY WW2 BUT I GOT AN MG42 SO JA".
Wish there was something that actually made him unique in the app.
Also fix what Senor asked for.

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